去美國留學的重要環(huán)節(jié)之一就是要做好留學文書的準備，很多同學不知道如何下手，這也是為難很多出國留學生的一個攔路虎，以下是一篇美國留學申請范文點評。跟著YJBYS小編來看看吧!歡迎閱讀。

　　美國留學申請文書范文

　　Pursue Sport Pursue Beauty

　　In China, the term Sport and the term Physical Education are exchangeable literally and practically. That is not right. For me sport is a way to feel the thrilling experience of life; pursuing nothing but beauty. To promote sports spirit I ran for the presidency of the Athletics Department in Student Union rather than the president of the Union.

　　Running for the position had no surprises, not only because I was well known as an athlete in the basketball court and track and field, but also because nobody was interested in the position. Still I was excited and I swore I would make sports exciting to everybody on campus.

　　For the first organized activity, I chose what I was good at —basketball. Before the sophomore tournament, I organized a less serious game in order to invite students， interests in sports and basketball. But the survey result disappointed me: only five teams from different classes were interested in a basketball tournament. No way could NBA games be exciting with only five teams to compete with each other; audiences would get bored without long term expectation and anticipation. “So what should we do?” I asked. “Nothing，” one vice president replied. “There should be something that we can do to make it right,” I said hopefully. “If girls could join that would be good，” a boy tried. t.qq.com/dalianliuxue000 aBingo, that’ s great, we could modify the rule for our basketball game，” a girl added. We shouted, yelled, argued, and eventually, we agreed: our game would have three players instead of five, regardless of sex and age while teams are only split by Junior and Senior, and even teachers could join in the senior game.

　　At the end of twenty days’ solicitation, we got thirty-two teams registered in total; almost all with boys and girls mixed, and five teams with teachers included. In consideration of so many new-comers for basketball, we slightly changed the rules: we changed the three seconds violation into five and eased the traveling violation, and made each half of the game be 15 minutes. “This is not ‘Basketball, anymore; it is ‘our basketball’，” the girl who had first suggested changing the rules claimed.

　　The basketball tournament changed the atmosphere of campus. People started becoming interested in sports, which brought them excitement, relief, and laughs. Sports added so much fun to our lives and it also changed our attitude to our studies and team-ship.

　　The success of the game also brought credit for me. After the game, I was assigned to take charge in organizing 6th YHHS Recreational Sports Meeting, YHHS Spring Sports Meeting, and YH High School Sophomore Basketball Tournament. I learned so much in organizing these events, and I was proud of my team. Without their enthusiastic support I wouldn’ t have enjoyed so much of the work - an opportunity to pursue something - beauty that gave me the same feeling as winning a sport game。

　　【追求運動，追求美】

　　在中國，“運動”和“體育’’這兩個詞經(jīng)常可以在字面上或者在實踐中互換使用。這是不正確的。 對我來說，運動是一種感受生命激情的方式，它追求的僅僅是一種美。為了弘揚真正的運動精神，我放棄了競選學生會主席，而參加了學生會體育部部長的競選。

　　競選的結(jié)果沒有讓我感到絲毫意外，并不是因為我在學校里是很有名的籃球和田徑運動員，而是因為沒有人對這個職位感興趣。但是我還是感到很興奮，我發(fā)誓要讓校園里的每個人都對運動產(chǎn)生熱情。

　　組織第一次活動的時候，我選擇了我擅長的籃球。在二年級聯(lián)賽開始之前，我打算組織一次娛樂性的比賽，讓同學們對籃球和運動產(chǎn)生興趣。然而調(diào)研結(jié)果卻讓我失望不.已：只有五支隊伍有興趣參加 籃球聯(lián)賽。要是美國NBA聯(lián)賽只有五支隊伍參加的話肯定也不會精彩，觀眾會因為沒有什么期待而感 到厭煩的。“那么我們怎么辦呢? ”我問道。“什么都不做。”學生會的一位副主席回答我說。“一定 有辦法讓這次聯(lián)賽進行下去的。”我信心滿滿地說。“如果女生也能夠參加就好了。” 一個男生試探性 地說。“對啊，這個主意太好了，我們可以修改籃球聯(lián)賽的規(guī)則”，一個女生補充道。我們不禁高興地大叫，歡呼，就這個問題我們也有過爭論，但是最終我們達成了共識：這次聯(lián)賽每支隊伍不再只有三個人，而是五個人，隊員不限制性別和年齡，全部隊伍只按照低年級和高年級來分組，甚至老師也可以參 加高年級隊伍。

　　經(jīng)過二十天的宣傳，總共有32支隊伍注冊參加比賽，幾乎所有的隊伍都是男女混搭，其中五支隊 伍中有老師參加。考慮到很多參賽人員都是新手，我們稍稍修改了一下規(guī)則：我們將三秒違例放寬成五秒違例，去掉了走步違例的規(guī)則，并且規(guī)定全場比賽分為上下半場，半場15分鐘。“這不再是那個‘籃 球’了，而是‘我們的籃球’ ”，提議改變規(guī)則的女生感嘆道。

　　這次籃球聯(lián)賽改變了校園的氛圍。大家開始對運動產(chǎn)生濃厚的興趣，因為運動讓他們感到刺激和釋放，為他們帶來歡笑。運動給我們的生活添加了如此多的樂趣，也讓我們改變了對學習和團隊合作 的態(tài)度。

　　這次聯(lián)賽的成功也讓我獲得了獎勵。比賽結(jié)束后，我被推舉為第六屆YH中學趣味運動會，YH中學 春季運動會和YH中學二年級籃球聯(lián)賽的負責人。組織這些比賽讓我獲益良多，我也為我的團隊感到自 豪。如果沒有他們積極地協(xié)助，我也不可能如此享受我的工作，這份工作給我了一個去追求美的機會，這讓我體會到和獲得比賽勝利同樣興奮的感覺。

　　【佳文精評】

　　“運動”和“體育”是我們常常見到的兩個詞，然而二者之間的區(qū)別與聯(lián)系卻并不是每個人都留意到的。作者顯然留意到了這一點，并且通過描寫組織籃球聯(lián)賽的實例闡釋出了自己的理解—— 體育是為了獲得勝利，而運動卻是為了參與其中，享受樂趣。從五支參賽隊伍到三十二支參賽隊伍，作者通過細節(jié)描繪講述了一個讓人振奮的故事，同時首尾段的呼應突出了文章的主題：運動是追求美的過程，而不是簡單追求勝利的過程。

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