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1.һ(Disagreements)^һ²ָ^һ߀˔IJһrB(ti)һ¼~һµȡ
1. When one have money he can do what he want to
(һXʲôʲô)onedžΔ˷QhaveĞhas ;ͬwantĞwantsǵ͵^һ
Ğ飺Once one has money he can do what he wants (to do)
2 Zeλ(Misplaced Modifiers)ӢZchZͬͬһZھӲͬλӵĺx׃@һcЇW]ҕ Ҫ`1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus
betterλòھĩ
3 Ӳ(Sentence Fragments)ڿZHpɽքZĵ`ȫԱǕZͲͬӽY˼_@Nrl(f)䌑ԺPЩafrl(f)
1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV radio newspaper and so on
벿for example by TV radio newspaper and so on һľHһЩB؞~Zܪɾ
Ğ飺There are many ways to know society for example by TV radio and newspaper
4 ҴZ(Dangling Modifiers)^ҴZָĶZcӵ߉Pϵy磺At the age of ten my grandfather died. @at the age of tenֻcʮqr]f lʮqrһmy grandfather ҂@ҴZ_һcȫͲôMˡ
Ğ飺
When I was ten my grandfather died
1. To do well in college good grades are essential
вʽZ to do well in college ߉Z
Ğ飺
To do well in college a student needs good grades
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