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2016年6月英語四級作文點(diǎn)評及范文
引導(dǎo)語：下面是小編整理的關(guān)于2016年6月英語四級作文的點(diǎn)評及范文，希望對大家有幫助。
A Letter to My Friend
此次大學(xué)英語四級寫作部分考查應(yīng)用文——書信的寫作。本道試題則是要求考生寫一封感謝信給一個朋友，就你曾身處困境時他給你提供的幫助進(jìn)行感謝。本題難度偏易，是一個大學(xué)生普遍有話可說的話題。值得注意的是，大家不應(yīng)忘記了書信體區(qū)別于短文寫作的格式要求，字?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)在120至180之間。
在篇章結(jié)構(gòu)方面，除去開頭的稱呼語和結(jié)尾的署名之外，建議考生采取三段式寫作。
第一段：表明寫信目的。開門見山，寫出為何寫這封感謝信(I am writing this letter in the purpose of…)，這里需要同學(xué)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象力，試想大學(xué)生在校園里會遇到什么困境(…when I can't adapt myself very well to the college life)
第二段：說明感謝理由。考生應(yīng)陳述困境的具體情況(As for me, it is the first time that I have been apart with my loving parents and come to a thoroughly strange place.)，以及朋友在幫助其度過困難中做了些什么(It is you who see through my weakness and stand by me in the darkest days.)。
第三段：總結(jié)展望。表述希望友誼長遠(yuǎn)發(fā)展的愿望(After all we have been through, I hope our friendship would go further and further.)，并闡述自身立場，希望朋友在遇到困難的時候自己也能從旁支持(Just remember that I would be there for you if you need any help.)。
此外，考生還應(yīng)注意書信體的口吻，寫信對象是同輩的朋友，因此，語氣應(yīng)當(dāng)親切友好。以上為2016年6月大學(xué)英語四級作文點(diǎn)評。
感謝信的寫作注意事項(文都教育版)
我們先來看一下這次作文的要求吧：
四級真題作文一：(感謝老師)
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your school teachers upon entering college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
四級真題作文二：(感謝家人)
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to your parents or any other family number upon making a memorable achievement. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
四級真題作文三：(感謝朋友)
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to express your thanks to one of your friends who helped you most when you were difficulty. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
通過題干我們可以分析出，針對感謝信的寫作要求，我們應(yīng)該注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
1. 格式要正確。與其他應(yīng)用文寫作一樣，書信體裁需要在正文的前面加上稱呼，在正文的末尾加上結(jié)束語，落款和署名。
2. 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號要正確。Dear+稱謂的后面一定要用逗號，不能用冒號。還要注意英語的句號是實(shí)心的，并且涉及到書名、電影名或者作品名的，要大些，英語中沒有書名號。
3. 考生需要根據(jù)題目要求完成寫作。在這一部分，考生需要注意字?jǐn)?shù)的要求是120-180字，不能少些或者超出。另外，雖然題目中并未對落款人作過多要求，但是考生還是有必要把敏感的人名、地名和學(xué)校名去掉，以防作弊嫌疑。
4. 通過三個題目的要求，我們都要明確表明我們的感激之心，表述時要目標(biāo)明確，語言貼切、充分，內(nèi)容言之有物，句子流暢地道。
開篇語：Dear+稱謂，
首段：開篇語的黃金句式
1. I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for the continuous assistance you offered to me these years.
2. I would like to extend my heartfelt thanks to you for your unselfish love shown to me during my preparation of College Entrance Examination.
3. I am writing to express my appreciation for the generous help you rendered to me since I entered this university.
中間段：具體感謝內(nèi)容表述的黃金句式
1. On the one hand, your generous help made it possible that I can gain a splendid academic achievement in my study career. It is because of your encouragement that now I can study in one of the leading universities of our country, and serve as chairman of Student Union.
2. On the other hand, with your help, I could get along well with my friends and have good cooperation with other members during work.
3. I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor. Besides, It is really an honor for me to be your sister and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.
4. You give me emotional security, care and love and support my study, which is part and parcel for my school days.
5. Without your assistance and care, I can not make good performance definitely. I take this opportunity to express our deep appreciation for the kind assistance you rendered me.
6. Your generous help made it possible that I pass my college entrance examination and obtain the good result. I will cherish the good will and family affection you showed me.
7. Your encouragement is my best drving force. Please accept my most cordial thanks for your best love, which I will always remember.
8. On the one hand, it is because of your encouragement and continuous assistance that now I have obtained a splendid academic achievement in my study career, and serve as chairman of Student Union.
9. On the other hand, with your help, I could get along well with classmates and have good cooperation with other members during work.
10. I will always remember your kindness and painstaking labor. It is really an honor to be your student, and I will cherish the goodwill you showed to me wherever I go.
尾段：結(jié)束語的黃金句式
1. In a word, my appreciation to you is beyond words.
2. In the years to come, I will make more effort to repay your kindness and refresh our family affection.
3. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind assistance.
4. In a word, my heartfelt gratitude to you is beyond words. In the years to come, I will study harder to repay your kindness and make more progress.
落款：祝福+姓名
Lovely yours, Sincerely yours, Yours sincerely等
姓名不要寫自己的名字。 Kevin，Li Ming，Li Hua 都可以。
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