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英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析
在日常的學(xué)習(xí)中，大家最熟悉的就是知識(shí)點(diǎn)吧？知識(shí)點(diǎn)也可以通俗的理解為重要的內(nèi)容。為了幫助大家掌握重要知識(shí)點(diǎn)，以下是小編精心整理的英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作常見錯(cuò)誤分析知識(shí)點(diǎn)，歡迎閱讀，希望大家能夠喜歡。
一、錯(cuò)誤類型及其修改
1.句子成分殘缺
We always working till late at night before taking exams.(誤)
We are always working till late at night before taking exams(正)
2.句子成分多余
This test is end, but there is another test is waiting forus. (誤)
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
3.主謂不一致
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (誤)
Someone/Somebody thinks that reading should be selective. (正)
4.動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)誤用
I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (誤)
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
5.動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用
The driver of the red car was died in the accident. (誤)
The driver of the red car died in the accident. (正)
6.詞類混淆
It is my point that reading must be selectively. (誤)
In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
Honest is so important for every person. (誤)
Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
7.名詞可數(shù)與不可數(shù)的誤用
In modern society, people are under various pressures(誤)
In modern society, people are under various kinds of pressure. (正)
8.動(dòng)詞及物與不及物的誤用
Because of his excellent performance, the boss rose his salary. (誤)
Because of his excellent performance, the boss raised his salary. (正)
9.動(dòng)賓搭配不當(dāng)
We must make solutions to the problem. (誤)
We must find a solution to the problem. (正)
It also may help you to make success. (誤)
It may also help you succeed/obtain your goal. (正)
10.根據(jù)中文逐字硬譯
Let us touch the outside world of campus.
Let’s keep in touch with the world outside of the campus.
Don’t forget to keep a good body health.(誤)
Don’t forget to keep fit/healthy.(正)
二、如何減少錯(cuò)誤?
1.打好腹稿再動(dòng)筆，減少涂改。
2.書寫漂亮的當(dāng)然更好，達(dá)不到的最起碼也要工整。
3.使用黑色水筆作答，白紙黑字，這樣能夠有效提高整潔度。
三、如何提高寫作分?jǐn)?shù)?
1.改變時(shí)態(tài)
The bell is ringing now. (一般)
There goes the bell! (高級(jí))
2.改變語(yǔ)態(tài)
People suggests that the meeting be put off. (一般)
It is suggested that the meeting be put off. (高級(jí))
3.使用不定式
He is so kind that he can do me a favor. (一般)
He is so kind as to do me a favor. (高級(jí))
4.使用過(guò)去分詞
Lisa walked out of the room and many guys followed her. (一般)
Followed by many guys, Lisa walked out of the lab. (高級(jí))
5.使用v-ing 形式
When she arrives, please give me a call. (一般)
On her arriving, please give me a call. (高級(jí))
6.使用名詞性從句
She happened to have met him. (一般)
It happened that she had met him. (高級(jí))
7.使用定語(yǔ)從句
The girl is spoken highly of. Her homework was well done. (一般)
The girl whose homework was well done is spoken highly of. (高級(jí))
8.使用狀語(yǔ)從句
I won’t believe what he says. (一般)
No matter what he says, I won’t believe. (高級(jí))
9.使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣
The patient didn’t die because there were the efforts of the doctor. (一般)
But for the efforts of the doctor, the patient would have died. (高級(jí))
10.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型
I was born in 1987. (一般)
It was in 1987 that I was born. (高級(jí))
11.使用倒裝
Though I’m sick, I’ll carry on. (一般)
Sick as I am, I’ll carry on. (高級(jí))
12.使用并列句
If you go through the gate, you’ll find me. (一般)
Go through the gate, and you’ll find me. (高級(jí))
最后，讓我們來(lái)看看高級(jí)詞匯。詞匯量的大小能體現(xiàn)你知識(shí)貯存量的多寡，也是衡量你英語(yǔ)水平的一個(gè)重要標(biāo)志。
As a result, the plan was a failure. (一般)
The plan turned out to be a failure. (高級(jí))
拓展：關(guān)于考研英語(yǔ)寫作的分析
英語(yǔ)一寫作：
寫作部分由A、B兩節(jié)組成，主要考察考生的書面表達(dá)能力，共30分。
A節(jié)：考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出約100詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的應(yīng)用性短文，包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等，共10分。
B節(jié)：考生根據(jù)提示信息寫出一篇160~200詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的短文。提示信息的形式有主題句、寫作提綱、規(guī)定情景、圖、表等，共20分。
英語(yǔ)二寫作：
寫作部分由A、B兩節(jié)組成，主要考察考生的書面表達(dá)能力，共2題，25分。
A節(jié)：考生根據(jù)所給情景寫出約100詞（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)）的應(yīng)用性短文，包括私人和公務(wù)信函、備忘錄、報(bào)告等，共10分。
B節(jié)：要求考生根據(jù)所規(guī)定的情景或給出的提綱，寫出一篇150詞以上的英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明文或議論文。提供情景的形式為圖畫、圖表或文字，共15分。
【失分點(diǎn)剖析】
任何一篇英語(yǔ)作文都應(yīng)該包含以下五大層次：詞匯、短語(yǔ)（搭配）、句子、段落和篇章。根據(jù)以往經(jīng)驗(yàn)，寫作難以取得高分的癥結(jié)可以歸納于以下4點(diǎn)：
1、寫作用詞缺乏規(guī)范性。具體體現(xiàn)在習(xí)慣用法錯(cuò)誤較多，詞匯與詞匯之間的搭配關(guān)系（包括修飾關(guān)系）錯(cuò)誤較多，不符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣，同時(shí)出現(xiàn)了許多完全漢語(yǔ)式的表達(dá)。
2、基本語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較多�；菊Z(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤屬于低級(jí)寫作錯(cuò)誤，一旦在考研英語(yǔ)試卷上出現(xiàn)，扣分將非常嚴(yán)重，甚至?xí)?~2個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)檔次。常見的基本語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤通常包括對(duì)英語(yǔ)的基本句型掌握不夠熟練、應(yīng)用能力較差、句子不完整等。
3、段落內(nèi)或段落間缺乏連貫性與銜接性。英語(yǔ)文章非常講究邏輯與段落展開，也就是通常所說(shuō)的段落內(nèi)部組織問(wèn)題。而很多考生很少注意到這一點(diǎn)，從而導(dǎo)致在寫作中很少使用句子之間的關(guān)系連接詞以及段落之間的表示銜接關(guān)系的詞匯與短語(yǔ)，給人一種句子之間雜亂無(wú)章、毫無(wú)頭緒的感覺(jué)，造成不必要的失分。
4、寫作用詞、用句以及結(jié)構(gòu)過(guò)于單一、缺乏變化。對(duì)于考研英語(yǔ)寫作來(lái)說(shuō)，語(yǔ)言的多樣性是一項(xiàng)非常重要的衡量標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，而考生們由于平時(shí)備考時(shí)不注意積累好詞好句，從而導(dǎo)致在考場(chǎng)上無(wú)詞可用、無(wú)句可用，只能用一些平庸而單調(diào)的詞匯、短語(yǔ)以及句型來(lái)應(yīng)付，結(jié)果只能是得到一般的分?jǐn)?shù)，甚至是低分。
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